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The Inheritance

2/3/2014

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EXCERPT

The men’s footsteps thudded on the hardwood floor along with the tap of the cane.  “Melody, do you want us to meet in the kitchen?” She recognized the lawyer’s voice and glanced at the kitchen table. There were some breakfast dishes along with a discarded newspaper. The dishes ended up in the sink and she tucked the paper under the counter. Running a dishrag over the table, she replied. “Sure, kitchen is good. I’ll make some coffee.”

Oliver Douglas entered with a smile and pulled out a chair. “Coffee would be appreciated. My wife calls it the devil’s brew since she started a caffeine free health kick. I try not to drink it in front of her. Removing temptation and all of that.”

Melody turned back to the counter to rinse out the coffee pot before she started a fresh batch. It also allowed her not to watch Levi prepare himself to sit. It would wound any man’s pride, having to struggle with a leg that wouldn’t cooperate, but in a man so young it must be worse. The tightness of his shoulders and his general demeanor let her know his injury was a permanent one. His face was more like a fallow field were hope would never grow even it was planted.

The aroma caused her to breathe deeply. The smell of coffee was so evocative. It reminded her of wrapping her cold hands around a warm cup countless mornings. For a second, it made her forget the wounded warrior at her table. She didn’t see any real choice. To fight him for the house would be well unpatriotic. Besides, he already had a lawyer. Was it Mr. Douglas?

The silver haired lawyer hummed under his breath as he arranged papers on the table. At least someone was happy. He could be contemplating the coffee or getting the business done with and returning back home. At least he had a home. Stop that. It isn’t anything you haven’t been through before.

It would be hard to imagine the gentlemanly lawyer penning such a stern missive. Besides, she didn’t recognize the name on the letter, only the attorney at law underneath.  Grabbing a dented tray that proclaimed the wonders of the Grand Canyon, she arranged cups and spoons on it. Never thought she’d use for this when she picked it up at the thrift shop.

“Uhm, I don’t have any sugar, but I do have artificial sweetener.” She put a couple packets of the substitute on the tray.

The lawyer stopped rustling the papers and smiled up at her. “Perfect. I need to lose a few pounds anyhow.”

Her eyes moved over to Levi. 

“I like mine black.” The words came out abrupt, rather like the man.

Just as well, she thought, since she didn’t own any creamer. She bobbed her head in acknowledgment, but it didn’t matter because he wasn’t looking at her. Well, be that way. I’ll show you who the better man is. Make that woman.


19 Comments
Sarah Cass link
2/3/2014 10:38:34 am

I'm practically biting my nails over this tension. Those two need to be locked in a room until they learn how to communicate. Sheesh. Can't wait to see what happens next!

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morgan k wyatt
2/4/2014 01:44:24 am

Thanks Sarah. This makes me wonder how hot things should be between the two of them. Welcome your opinion.

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V.L. Locey link
2/3/2014 08:49:26 pm

I`m with Sarah. These two need to be locked in a room together! Great scene.

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morgan k wyatt
2/4/2014 01:45:20 am

There is so much going to happen to the two. Sorry, I can leak it yet.

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Jillian Chantal
2/4/2014 01:22:23 am

I'm enjoying the tension of this scene but I also now want some coffee. I can smell it and feel the heat in my hands as I hold the cup. Well done

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morgan k wyatt
2/4/2014 01:43:15 am

Thanks Jillian. Means a lot to me because I don't drink coffee. LOL

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Sherry Gloag link
2/4/2014 04:10:23 am

Great build up of tension. I guess whatever the lawyer is about to tell them will break the deadlock between them. At least I hope so.

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morgan k wyatt
2/9/2014 03:44:14 am

It will have a definite impact.

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Jean Joachim
2/4/2014 09:43:10 am

I have much empathy for her and her facing the loss of her home. She's brave and strong. And I like Levi, too. I have faith he'll do the right thing. They are a great pair, dancing around each other, warily. I love this story!!

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Lindsay Downs
2/4/2014 09:47:31 am

I could cut the tension in the kitchen with a knife it's so strong.

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morgan k wyatt
2/9/2014 03:45:08 am

Spoiler alert: it is about to get more tense.

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Angela Adams
2/4/2014 09:49:27 am

A page turner for sure!

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morgan k wyatt
2/9/2014 03:45:54 am

Thanks Angela. I am enjoying this story because I am writing it much slower.

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Stefan Ellery link
2/8/2014 01:14:12 am

I can't wait to see the end result. I also agree witht he others.Lock them up in a room.

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morgan k wyatt
2/9/2014 03:47:00 am

Wait and see, Stefan. Your words may be prophetic.

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Iris
2/8/2014 04:11:39 pm

Nice built up of tension. Can't wait for more. Really enjoying this story!

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morgan k wyatt
2/9/2014 03:48:18 am

Thanks Iris. Sometime I am surprised what happens and I outlined the story. LOL. Different people appear such as Mary who were not in the outline.

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Trisha Faye link
2/9/2014 04:47:56 am

No, no, no - you can't stop right there. Excellent scene, love the details of the coffee and the serving tray ... but I do NOT want to stop reading yet. This is one I want to keep going until the book is done.

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Tricia
2/9/2014 04:49:27 am

I love the tension between them. I really hope they get together!

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    Morgan K Wyatt

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