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The Inheritance 11

9/22/2013

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Recap: 
Levi is on the island where he used to seek sanctuary as an orphaned teen. After falling, he considers how his life changed from the time when used to frequent the island.








EXCERPT
He could have called his uncle anytime during his enlistment, but he didn’t. Pride kept him from making the call.  If he contacted Roy, then he’d asked about how he was doing in the Army.

The Army itself wasn’t too bad.  The strict discipline, the routine, even knowing what to expect on most days, gave him a feeling of stability and belonging. It gave him a purpose when Angelique left him, taking his enlistment bonus with her. Roy warned him that the dark-eyed beauty bore him no love. His initial response was the man had no clue what love was since he was a lonely, bitter old man that no woman chose to love.

Wincing, he remembered the shock on his uncle’s face. He could have hit him with a two by four and not done as much damage. Roy managed to say, “You’re wrong,” before turning away.

At the time, he thought he meant he was wrong for marrying Angelique. Yeah, Levi would admit now that his uncle was right. A letter from an anonymous friend tipped him off. Angelique ran through his pay as if water while he awaited orders in a desert hellhole. That part wasn’t unexpected.  Besides, he wanted to take care of his wife.  He liked the idea of someone waiting for him to return.  He’d idealized the woman giving her traits she did not possess.

As the only civilian in the recruitment office, Angelique had access to enlistee information.  Roy insisted she knew who got the better enlistment bonus. Levi’s hefty bonus for enrolling in explosive ordinance job specification could have inspired her sudden love for a man five years her junior. The fact she took off with another man using his enlistment bonus only confirmed Roy’s theory.


13 Comments
Tai link
9/23/2013 09:32:18 pm

I hate Angelique. I want to kick her ass. Am I allowed to write that?

I hope he swallows his pride and calls Uncle Roy.

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Morgan K Wyatt
9/24/2013 09:27:14 pm

Hi Tai,
I don't like Angelique either, but there are several versions of her floating around. Thanks for commenting.

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V.L. Locey link
9/23/2013 10:00:49 pm

Another great excerpt! I

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Morgan K Wyatt
9/24/2013 09:27:57 pm

Thanks Vicki

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Kathleen Ball link
9/24/2013 07:06:56 am

Dang tag chaser- the Marines attract women like that too- unfortunately

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Morgan K Wyatt
9/24/2013 09:33:21 pm

Hi Kathleen,
Both my sons are in the service, so I know some of the heartache and betrayal that comes naturally to some. (Growls like a mama bear.)

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Lindsay Downs
9/24/2013 09:13:24 am

No wonder he's so bitter having been taken advantage of by Angelique

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Morgan K Wyatt
9/24/2013 09:31:35 pm

Thanks Lindsay. It is always good to get a man's opinion.

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Trisha Faye link
9/24/2013 01:03:48 pm

Ah, explains a lot. What a nasty woman!
Great scene.

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Morgan K Wyatt
9/24/2013 09:34:44 pm

Hi Trisha,
She is a nasty woman, but enough of a siren to break the relationship between Levi and his uncle. Thanks for commenting. :)

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Sarah Cass link
9/27/2013 12:23:05 am

Wow...Roy has been through a lot himself. I hope he finds healing...and has learned his lesson about his uncle's advice...

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Iris Blobel link
9/27/2013 07:18:40 pm

Beautiful as usual ... I have a feeling Roy did more than just leaving the house to both of them .....

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Tricia
9/28/2013 09:35:39 am

Wow, Angelique is a piece of work! I wish I could get my hands on her...which would be hard since she's fictional! Great work!!

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    Morgan K Wyatt

    Secret Cravings author of contemporary and historical romances.

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