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The Inheritance 8

8/27/2013

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Today's prompt is waves.  Levi has found his recent life pretty rough sailing with his recent hospitalization due to his battle-related injury. On top of that, his only relative, Uncle Roy, died without him resolving the hurtful words that kept the two of them apart. 

He finds himself drawn back to the small home that sheltered him after his parents died. The lake provided solace along with the solid presence of his uncle.  Too bad, an interloper stands in his way to returning to less complicated time.

The Inheritance 8
The time he and Roy shared working on the boat meant more to him in retrospect than it did at the time. It meant a great deal then.  Life dealt harshly with him or so he thought, leaving him with an uncle he barely knew while taking his parents. His anger at the world he heaped on his only remaining relative.  Instead of becoming angry or distant, his uncle taught him what he knew about reading the waves, sailing, even making a boat the old fashioned way as opposed to the factory made fiberglass shells.

His hand caressed the side of the boat. Sweat, determination and love went into the boat. It hadn’t been a fast build. The oars dipped into the water, pulling the boat across the still surface. His impatience must have chafed on Roy, but all he would do was murmur that things worth doing took time. Two years passed before they completed the project.

Levi resented school that took him away from working on the boat. He didn’t make too many friends at his new school at first. The large chip weighing down his shoulder had him looking for fights that he easily found as a new kid. Old Roy knew what was going on, but instead of lectures on staying out of trouble, he taught him to fight. Quick, dirty moves his relative learned on dangerous shores where the American fleet was not always welcomed. Eventually Levi became someone not to anger. It was then he developed friends, at least guy friends who decided it was better to be his pal as opposed to a potential punching bag. Girls were a different matter, though. As a tall, tongue-tied and combative male, he was not a chick magnet. In that regard, not much had changed.


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V.L. Locey link
8/26/2013 09:22:34 pm

Great post! Loved the attention to detail

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Morgan K Wyatt
8/27/2013 11:36:14 am

Hi V.L.,
These characters just seem to flow. I don't even think about them too much. They are already there hanging out by the lake. :)

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Sarah Cass link
8/26/2013 11:17:41 pm

What a complicated life and what trials he's gone through. I hope he figures out why Roy left the house to both of them...after all, his uncle didn't steer him wrong when he was a youth..

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Morgan K Wyatt
8/27/2013 11:37:09 am

Old Roy is a kind and generous soul. :) Thanks for commenting.

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Kathleen Ball link
8/27/2013 03:24:06 am

very vivid!!

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Morgan K Wyatt
8/27/2013 11:37:47 am

Thanks, Kathleen

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Jean Joachim
8/27/2013 04:49:43 am

I love this. Now we get to learn something about Levi that makes us more sympathetic to him. You're rounding him out. I love it. This is a very interesting story. I'm enjoying it.

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Morgan K Wyatt
8/27/2013 11:38:42 am

Thanks Jean. I will consider it high praise from a writer of your caliber. :)

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Sherry Gloag link
8/27/2013 07:22:31 am

You said a lot in few words.

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Morgan K Wyatt
8/27/2013 11:39:40 am

Thanks Sherry. I think everyone on Tuesday Tales does a fine job at this.

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Lindsay Downs
8/27/2013 08:09:58 am

Great scene and I love the little bit of back story giving us a little insight into Levi.

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Morgan K Wyatt
8/27/2013 11:40:44 am

Thanks Lindsay. I am working on getting the right amount and not info dumping.

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Trisha Faye link
8/27/2013 12:47:01 pm

Great job at sharing insight into Levi's character & background.

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Morgan K Wyatt
8/29/2013 07:39:57 am

Hi Trisha,
Thanks for stopping by. I had to make Levi appear to be a jerk to Melody, but not be a jerk. LOL

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Iris Blobel link
8/27/2013 07:57:34 pm

Beautiful insight to who Levi is. I wonder whether his uncle left the house to both with a purpose in mind.

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Morgan K Wyatt
8/29/2013 07:41:00 am

Hi Iris,
We can only speculate since old Roy is dead. Thanks for stopping by.

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Jillian
8/27/2013 11:56:11 pm

I'm loving the fleshing out of Levi and insight into who he is.

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Morgan K Wyatt
8/29/2013 07:42:16 am

Hi Jillian,
I think I saw the making of a few Levis in my classroom. Thanks for commenting.

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Stefan link
9/2/2013 03:27:13 am

You've set an interesting picture.

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Morgan K Wyatt
9/2/2013 09:20:39 pm

Hi Stefan,
As a man, you could probably identify with him trying to read Melody.

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Tricia
9/2/2013 10:34:55 am

I am really starting to fall in love with Levi. He's turning out to be a complicated but heroic character.

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Morgan K Wyatt
9/2/2013 09:22:06 pm

Hi Tricia,

I was trying to decide who I wanted him to be. Because I believe everyone has seeds of greatness within them. Levi is no exception. Thanks for commenting.

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