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The Inheritance 9

9/1/2013

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Today's prompt is building. I will freely admit changing the word homes to buildings to suit the prompt. It will stay homes in the original text. Newcomers to the story, here's a quick summary.  Roy has left his modest house and rowboat to his hospice nurse, Melody, and his estranged nephew, Levi. They are supposed to jointly share the items. Needless to say, neither one is cool with the plan. In fact, they suspect each other of mercenary motives. They haven't met until recently. Upon meeting, they discover an inconvenient attraction to one another. Melody recognizes the family resemblance and leaves in a hurry. Levi is still clueless to Melody's identity. 


Today's Tuesday Tale
A few hard pulls on the oars sent him in the direction of the small wooded island. It wasn’t much really, just enough trees to hide a boy. His sanctuary looked small and sparse close up. He’d imagine Roy could have spotted him through the skinny tree trunks. No wonder the man never asked where he’d been. 

A few buildings dotted the shore he wondered, which one his mystery woman lived in. As well as he could remember, most of the residents were old. She might be visiting. Why was he bothering to think of her? She’d made her opinion clear. His masculine instinct made him aware of attractive single females in his vicinity. A quick glance at her left hand confirmed she sported no wedding band. Her eyes flared with awareness when he turned. No mistaking it, and yet her interest cooled suddenly, which made no sense.

He replayed the meeting in his head. Perhaps, he was too forward asking her to go for a boat ride. She didn’t know him, which explained her hesitation and questionable excuse. That was it. Once he got settled in the house, he might meet her again around the lake. A snort escaped him as he realized what he was doing. Planning  an impromptu meeting that would somehow lead to a happily ever after. Yeah, right.

No woman had much use for a man who was only a partial man. A fellow patient at the rehab center told him that women were crazy about wounded warriors as the center referred to their patients. Women felt like it was their patriotic duty to welcome them home. His roommate expected a heartier welcome than he did. Even if Levi’s lack of welcome was a forgone conclusion, it didn’t mean he liked it.




17 Comments
V.L. Locey link
9/2/2013 09:37:42 pm

Love the feel of this excerpt!

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Morgan Wyatt
9/4/2013 09:18:55 pm

Good Morning,
Thanks for commenting. Levi is reflective in this piece. Most kids think what they have is so bad until they don't have it. Same with Levi.

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Lindsay Downs
9/3/2013 08:22:31 am

Wonderfully insightful scene into Levi

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Morgan K Wyatt
9/4/2013 09:21:20 pm

Thanks Lindsay. I have two adult sons in the service and it changes them. My twenty-year-old son went to Iraq a fun-loving guy and came back a more insightful man. I am former military too.

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Trisha Faye link
9/4/2013 10:34:50 am

Nice scene. I can't wait for the whole book, I love how your story is progressing. Good job!

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Morgan K Wyatt
9/4/2013 09:22:32 pm

Hi Trisha,
It may take me a year to finish the book. LOL. Thanks for stopping by.

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Iris Blobel link
9/4/2013 01:12:46 pm

REALLY enjoying this story!

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Morgan K Wyatt
9/4/2013 09:24:16 pm

Thanks Iris, I might have to use your comments for pre-publicity when I get ready to publish. :) I am amazed how many talented writers are in Tuesday Tales and enjoy reading everyone's excerpts.

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Kathleen Ball link
9/6/2013 07:11:39 am

wounded warrior- great character

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Morgan K Wyatt
9/6/2013 11:05:39 am

Thanks Kathleen. Wounded warriors seemed to be in this year :)

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Jean
9/6/2013 08:48:28 am

I love this peek into Levi. You've made him human, sympathetic. Now I'll be ticked if she doesn't fall for him. Well done. Great scene.

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Morgan K Wyatt
9/6/2013 11:06:38 am

Levi thinks Melody is a jerk and a interloper. Sigh. Is there any hope for them?

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Sarah Cass link
9/8/2013 03:00:39 am

There'd better be hope for them, Morgan! Now that I've seen more of Levi's side I'm liking him more and more. I know they have a big, huge, issue between them already, but I do hope that they are able to work it out. They seem just perfect for each other...

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Morgan K Wyatt
9/9/2013 03:56:44 am

Sarah,

I think you have the heart of a matchmaker. Thanks for commenting.

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Jillian
9/9/2013 11:59:12 pm

I like that you seem to be writing a wounded warrior story. Less than perfect heroes are appealing to me.

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Morgan K Wyatt
9/10/2013 10:14:25 pm

Hi Jillian,
I like love stories that could happen as opposed to fairy tales. Thanks for commenting. :)

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Sherry Gloag
9/13/2013 11:44:39 pm

This drew me in and caught my interest, I hope you offer more.

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