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The Inheritance, Part 13

10/6/2013

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Today's prompt is evergreen. If you recall, our wounded hero is on the small island in the middle of the lake. He's reminiscing about how his marriage to Angelique broke apart and how his pride prevented him from contacting his uncle.

He is also looking for a time capsule he buried as a boy.





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Time to get back he couldn’t miss the meeting with his lawyer, especially since he had an interloper to eject.  His eyes focused on the ground to prevent stumbling over a tree root again. Off to his left, he spotted a half circle of stones under a scraggly evergreen branch. That was it. He knew it on an instinctual level. It would only take a few seconds to uncover his childhood treasure.

Looking about, he found a broken limb to employ as a digging tool. If the can were there, it wouldn’t be too far down. The day Roy rowed him out to the island to bury his capsule was early on in their relationship. He didn’t know his taciturn relative that well. Levi believed his uncle’s lack of chatter coincided with his appearance.  Levi had scampered out of the boat, anxious to be away from the silent man, so different from his father. His uncle had waited in the dinghy as he’d dug the shallow hole.

Several stabs at the sandy ground stirred up the soil. On the eighth try, a metallic thud rewarded his jab.  Excitement bubbled through his body, causing him to drop to his knees and paw at the dirt. Eager digging revealed the rusty popcorn tin that Roy had insisted on to encase his memory project.  His initial attempts to pry the lid off failed due to the waterproof caulking that sealed the it.  He’d have to take it with him.


Images of the woman who managed to weasel her way into his uncle’s affections grew as he carried the tin to the boat.  The woman took the  form of a fifty-ish gold digger whose best years were behind her.  Her hair would be an unnaturally bright and her voice rough from chain smoking. 

 


9 Comments
V.L. Locey link
10/7/2013 09:29:48 pm

Aha! So he now has the tin in his hands.

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Sherry Gloag link
10/7/2013 09:36:09 pm

:-) Glad I made it into your site this week. This sounds interesting. I half expected him to be transported off somewhere else and miss the vital meeting!

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Jean
10/7/2013 11:10:54 pm

Okay, so now I need to know what's in that can! Can't wait for him to meet the woman he's vowed to hate. Heh heh. Love this story.

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Jillian
10/8/2013 04:45:35 am

open it, open it!!! I want to seeeeeee! :)

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Tricia
10/8/2013 07:14:53 am

I love how he already has an image of her in his mind like she does of him. They are in for a shock! Great job

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Lindsay Downs
10/8/2013 08:14:13 am

Can't wait to see what's in the can. Interesting that he's still feeling anger toward the woman.

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Iris link
10/8/2013 10:21:49 am

Oh man !!

So we've still got question about Melody who we haven't heard from in a while, we want to know about the time capsule AND now you're teasing us with a woman in uncle roy's life.

CANNOT WAIT for next week! Well done.

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Trisha Faye link
10/11/2013 11:06:33 am

Excellent! I love reading your writing each week. I admire the way you weave the words together.

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Davee Jones link
10/12/2013 03:34:40 am

Now, really interested to know what's in the tin. :)

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    Morgan K Wyatt

    Secret Cravings author of contemporary and historical romances.

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