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The Inheritance

5/27/2014

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Today's prompt is author. We left Levi and Melody at the kitchen table. 

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“How did you know I didn’t make the sandwich for you as, um, appreciation?”

He snorted, then laughed, before answering. “The slam of your door probably echoed through the neighborhood. I don’t claim to be good with women.”

You were good with me. She kept the thought behind her teeth where it belonged.

“Even I knew that you were truly pissed. The best thing I thought I could do was take Charmer for a walk. Thought he could give me some advice.”

She finished constructing her sandwich and turned to catch his shrug. He had to be unaware of it, still it was endearing. Reminiscent of the old movie heroes making a similar gesture in respect to a woman that read: Dames, what can you do about them.

Charmer trotted into the kitchen and waited until Melody slid into her chair before he plopped down between Levi and her.  One part of her considered the canine a diplomat, but another part recognized him for the scavenger he was. His best bet was to sit between them.

“Did he give you any good advice?” She bit into her sandwich rendering herself silent as she chewed. It was just as well because she never knew what other witticism she might author. The overhead light threw yellowish light over the two of them rather like a modern painting. If titled, it would be Late Supper or more appropriately, Awkward Snack by Two Strangers forced to Share a House.

Levi finished his bite and chased it with a swallow of water. “Actually, Charmer didn’t have any advice. I suspect he was owned by a man, which explains his lack of knowledge.”

Another funny, the unexpected poke at men surprised a laugh out of her causing her to spew food across the table. Good God, what had she done? Using her hand, she tried to brush up the crumbs. Her eyes stayed trained on her hand, afraid to see Levi’s disgusted look.

His hand covered her hand she was using to corral crumbs and ridding the table of the evidence of her descent into adolescence table manners. “Leave it. No doubt, I’ll leave my own share of crumbs before I’m finished.”

He sounded normal, not pissed, not disgusted, rather a matter of fact.  A quick upward glance revealed his eyes soft with understanding. At least, she thought that was what it was. No knowing smirk or superior attitude, Levi never struck her as being that way. Her lips parted to speak, but then closed when no words came to mind. Could she say, I don’t always spit food when eating, but when I do, I make sure to pick the person that my social gaffe would do the most damage.

They both sat under the yellow light saying nothing. Being silent was nothing new to her. It was often her only recourse in living in unstable circumstances. Early on, she discovered defending herself with the truth never helped. Those who chose to accuse her had already made up their mind. Any defense on her part was backtalk and that never worked out well. Silence conveyed guilt, acceptance and even contriteness.

The hallway clock’s ticks filled the space around them.  Melody envisioned numbers tumbling around them as if in a cartoon. How long could they sit saying nothing? Talk about a pregnant pause. The expression took on more meaning since she was in it. What would the silence give birth to? All she wanted was for Levi to return to eating his sandwich. Maybe he couldn’t after her stomach turning display.

Charmer’s whimper broke the stillness. The tension could have affected the canine too. Levi lifted his hand allowing Melody to pour her crumbs nearer to her side of the table. Her Intention was to sweep them into her hand and offer them to Charmer. Her eyes stayed on her hand that was almost at the edge of the table, Levi spoke, causing her to forget to put up her other hand to catch the crumbs.  Luckily, the dog was ready for such an incident.

“It really wasn’t anything that bad. Consider I’ve had soldiers blown up beside me. I saw something flash across your face. You were with me, then, you weren’t. If you were a combat veteran, I’d say you were having flashbacks.” He angled his head and stared. His expression became contemplative before he spoke softly. “You are a combat veteran, not from the war, but life.”


18 Comments
Iris
5/26/2014 12:01:36 pm

Another nice scene and well done on the prompt use :-)

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morgan k wyatt
6/2/2014 10:12:34 am

Thanks Iris. It is always hard to know how to use the prompt.

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Jean Joachim
5/26/2014 12:08:45 pm

What a beautiful scene! So soft and sensitive. I love what is growing between these two, an understanding. For the first time she's with someone who gets that life has not been easy for her. It's truly lovely. This story is touching my heart.

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Morgan K Wyatt
6/2/2014 10:14:21 am

Thanks Jean. This story has been a slow write with several layers. I truly don't what they'll do sometimes. :)

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V.L. Locey link
5/26/2014 09:23:14 pm

What a wonderfully touching scene. I really like how you`re bringing this couple together.

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morgan k wyatt
6/2/2014 10:15:35 am

High praise from the author who really knows how to set up a scene. Thanks. :)

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Sarah cass link
5/26/2014 11:05:08 pm

Ugh...ow...oh, my heart. That last line. I want Levi for myself now...that one line just erased the past few months of the pain these two have put me through. Oh, dear...she better respond right or I might cry.

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morgan k wyatt
6/2/2014 10:17:26 am

Stay with me, there will be a few more bumps in the road, but I can guarantee a happy ending.

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Davee Jones link
5/28/2014 07:55:10 am

such a calming, yet intimate, scene and they are only sharing sandwiches. great use of the prompt.

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Morgan Wyatt
6/2/2014 10:19:29 am

Thanks Davee. I wrestle with how difficult it would be to share a small house with a stranger you just happen to find attractive.

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Trisha Faye link
5/30/2014 02:56:55 am

I've enjoyed every scene in this story.
I thought my favorite line today was the painting title, "Awkward Snack by Two Strangers forced to Share a House."
But then it got edged out with this one, "I don’t always spit food when eating, but when I do, I make sure to pick the person that my social gaffe would do the most damage."
But then ... you went and ended with that awesome last line.
Great job!

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Morgan K Wyatt
6/2/2014 10:21:39 am

Thanks Trisha. I often wondered why I never had a perfect life, but now I know I was doing research for stories I had yet to write.

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Stefan link
5/30/2014 03:30:47 am

I wonder how she will respond to Levi's insight.

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Morgan K Wyatt
6/2/2014 10:23:11 am

I will admit I trimmed her reaction to fit into this week's spot. Eventually, this year I hope, The Inheritance will be published.

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Kathleen Ball link
6/1/2014 08:38:26 am

love the growth of their relationship

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Morgan K Wyatt
6/2/2014 10:25:31 am

Right now, they've only known each other for little more than a day. It seems like much longer since Melody knew about Levi.

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Jillian Chantal
6/2/2014 12:49:42 am

Awesome post. AND I mean that literally. I am in awe at the great lines - especially the last one.

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Morgan K Wyatt
6/2/2014 10:28:59 am

Thanks Jillian. Your comment means a great deal to me. I'm working on becoming a better writer. SCP, you guys, and my patient editor, Larriane have helped tremendously.

I love reading everyone's story and finding new ways to show, and not tell. Every night when I read myself to sleep I'm learning how to be a better writer.

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