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Tuesday Tales: The Inheritance

6/10/2014

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Picture Prompt today is a river scene. Melody and Levi were  at a table eating sandwiches. Melody jumps up to make another sandwich. Levi slips up behind her after telling her he doesn't need another sandwich. This is where today's excerpt starts.









EXCERPT
“You startled me. It’s amazing how quiet you can move.”

Levi's lips tilted up, but not quite a smile, but as if he was considering it, but hadn’t quite made up his mind. “Amazed me too. Didn’t think I’d be able to move as quiet with the fake leg, but I’m learning to, I’m just not as fast.”

His proximity left her nerves a little jangled, not to mention that his nearness made other parts of her kick into automatic overdrive. Not a viable candidate might as well calm down.  Too bad, her body wasn’t listening to her brain. She inhaled deeply wondering how she was going to get by the sizable man in her way. She stepped to her right intending to go around him, but his hand landed on her shoulder stopping her.

Children’s voices drifted through the screen door as she found herself caught in Levi’s intense gaze. His sharp, alert eyes missed very little. His continued existence bore witness to the fact. Part of her heard a child shout Ready or Not.   A bead of sweat rolled down her neck and slipped under her shirt.

Melody found herself drowning in his gaze. It reminded her of the time she almost fell into the river. A stranger grabbed her arm before she hit water.  

Her heart pounded hard making its presence known. Would he kiss her again? Her tongue slipped out licking her lips in anticipation. It would be a bad thing and would make things more complicated. Instead, her mind spun a fantasy affair where the two engaged in a torrid romance all in the span it took for his words to coalesce in the air.  

“I’m not Roy. Not some sick, old man on the edge of kicking off. Don’t let the lack of a leg fool you. I don’t need you taking care of me or feeling sorry for me.” His hand dropped as he pivoted and headed for his room.


8 Comments
Jean Joachim
6/9/2014 12:51:12 pm

Stubborn, proud, stupid man!! What torture, waiting for them to get together. Well done. This is a beautiful passage.

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Sarah Cass link
6/10/2014 12:21:57 am

ARGH. Oh, Levi...why? You two were so close...You really are making me insane with this wait!! I just want to clunk their heads together and lock them in a room until they figure it out. lol. Lovely, love the children's call at just that right time. Ready or not, indeed.

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Sherry Gloag link
6/10/2014 06:57:00 am

Guess if she want to push him away she just lies about feeling sorry for him. Daft man...

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V.L. Locey link
6/10/2014 07:55:28 am

Son of a nutcracker, that darned stubborn man!

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Jillian
6/10/2014 09:13:05 am

I Love the way you described the bead of sweat rolling on her. Perfect.

And this man. He needs a swift kick! LOL

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Kathleen Ball link
6/15/2014 08:40:03 am

love it- can't wait for them to get together

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Iris
6/17/2014 10:56:34 am

Loved Vicki's comment ... my sentiments exactly.

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Stefan link
6/28/2014 10:42:04 am

He is taking too long, he needs a rolling pin to knock some sense into him.

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    Morgan K Wyatt

    Secret Cravings author of contemporary and historical romances.

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